Category: Writers Block
She died today.
I’m not sure why?
She left us this way.
I’m not sure again?
I thought of nonsense yesterday……….
I think of serious feelings right now.
It’s words like……….
Died, Killed, Hurt, and Murdered……….
That jump start our emotions for a single moment at a time……….
At a time meaning they don’t last,
one day at a time becomes the unsatisfied past.
She died today.
And yet we still laugh!
She left us this way.
And yet we still complain!
Even though we didn’t know her,
Even though we didn’t see her,
We don’t have to act as if we never talked to her.
She was one of us,
we are one of her,
she should be remembered.
our respect we should send to her
Some more of these? Well, they're not bad at all. From reading all your random writing, I've noticed you have a very broad mind...
Hmm, I like it. But I'm wondering who the metaphorical her is, in this case?
Alicia, you nosy thang you! lol :p
all the innocent women who die in the middle east, all the women that die in wars that don't concern them. it could be any one of these people. the annonimous people if you will
Got it, Faraaz. thanks for the clarification. It gives me a far better understanding of the poem.
Oh, now I get it...man, I feel slow. :d